Friday, September 12, 2014

The Query Helper - Giving Away 3 Critiques today!

It's Friday! You know what that means!


The first three people to comment below with their email and their answer to the following question will get a query critique:

That is your punctuation nemesis?

Mine is the comma, this week.... Looking forward to the answers and working with whoever comments!


  1. Mine is the comma too. Once I was so frustrated I wrote a poem about commas.

    my email is

  2. Mine is introductory sentences! Erin, my fiancee and my editor, will highlight a paragraph or sometimes an entire passage and tell me that it is comprised entirely of introductory sentences. It sounded good to my ear when I read it out loud, but I'll look and dog blam it if she isn't right. Sigh. My email is

  3. Hmmm. My punctuation nemesis may also be commas, only because I love them so much. COMMAS IN ALL THE SENTENCES. Except no, because that can lead to clunky sentences. Formerly, my punctuation nemesis was em dashes because I didn't even realize I wasn't using them correctly. >.<

    My email:

  4. Hi, My name is Sandie, and I'm a comma-holic. I put them everywhere. And I mean everywhere.
    I know I'm too late for the query, but I had to share. Maybe we can form Comma-holics Annonymous.

    1. I think CHA is a great idea! Haha. Thanks for the comment!