Wednesday, July 22, 2015

Bartles Go Fund Me Auction Item #20: Query + 1st 5 Pages Critique by Tobie Easton

About this item: A query and first 5 pages critique

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Tobie Easton
Tobie Easton was born and raised in Los Angeles, California, where she’s grown from a little girl who dreamed about magic to a twenty-something who writes about it. A summa cum laude graduate of the University of Southern California, Tobie hosts book clubs for tweens and teens. She and her very kissable boyfriend enjoy traveling the globe and fostering packs of rescue puppies. Tobie loves chocolate chip cookies and Oxford commas.

Check out Tobie’s debut novel, EMERGE (Month9Books, 2016). 

Starting Bid $10  

TURN AROUND TIME: Please allow two weeks for query critiques + 1st chapters, four weeks for partials, and six weeks for full critiques. Donors will discuss turnaround times with winners. All winning bids are guaranteed. Should some unforeseen event happen, money will be returned to winner or the winner may choose to have Emily Moore provide the critique. 


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  2. The winner is: Evelyn Lauterbach with a bid of $30.00. Please pay for your auction item by entering it on the GoFundMe campaign here: After you make your donation, send your email address to When we’ve verified your donation, we will send you information on how to claim your item. You have 24 hours to place your donation or the item will be given to the next highest bidder. Thank you!

  3. Evelyn hasn't claimed it so Beverley Baird is welcome to it! Please pay for the item on the GoFundMe page ( and email me. Thanks!

  4. Congratulations to Beverley Baird! I wanted to apologize for not understanding I had 24 hours to pay. This is a loss for me, as I was so excited-- maybe next time. Thank you once again.

    1. Thanks for being a good sport about it!