Wednesday, July 22, 2015

Bartles Go Fund Me Auction Item #27: Query + 1st Chapter Critique by Brenda Drake

About this item: A Query + 1st Chapter Critique

Donated by...

Brenda Drake

Brenda Drake is an author represented by Peter Knapp of New Leaf Literary, and also writing contest extraordinaire. Her young adult novel THIEF OF LIES is the first in the Library Jumpers Series, and is due out January 2016 from Entangled Teen.

Starting Bid $10  

TURN AROUND TIME: Please allow two weeks for query critiques + 1st chapters, four weeks for partials, and six weeks for full critiques. Donors will discuss turnaround times with winners. All winning bids are guaranteed. Should some unforeseen event happen, money will be returned to winner or the winner may choose to have Emily Moore provide the critique. 


  1. The winner is: Jane Walker with a bid of $60.00. Please pay for your auction item by entering it on the GoFundMe campaign here: After you make your donation, send your email address to When we’ve verified your donation, we will send you information on how to claim your item. You have 24 hours to place your donation or the item will be given to the next highest bidder. Thank you!

  2. Jane hasn't claimed this item so Sharon Shadrick is welcome to it! Please pay for the item on the GoFundMe page ( and then email me. Thanks!