Wednesday, July 22, 2015

Bartles Go Fund Me Auction Item #29: Social Media Platform Analysis + First 50 Pages Critique by Carrie Ann

About this item: a 50 page critique for any genre, any age level except for horror/gore. The critique will have in-line comments. PLUS a social media platform analysis! This will give you a detailed review of how your digital platform appears and ways to improve. Once won, this package can be split between you and a friend. Details here.

Donated by...
Carrie Ann

Carrie Ann is a digital marketing pro, as well as a YA writer and the brains behind the popular parody Twitter account, @broodingYAhero.

Starting Bid $10  

TURN AROUND TIME: Please allow two weeks for query critiques + 1st chapters, four weeks for partials, and six weeks for full critiques. Donors will discuss turnaround times with winners. All winning bids are guaranteed. Should some unforeseen event happen, money will be returned to winner or the winner may choose to have Emily Moore provide the critique. 


  1. The winner is: Stephanie with a bid of $30.00. Please pay for your auction item by entering it on the GoFundMe campaign here: After you make your donation, send your email address to When we’ve verified your donation, we will send you information on how to claim your item. You have 24 hours to place your donation or the item will be given to the next highest bidder. Thank you!

  2. Stephanie hasn't claimed it so Natasha Christensen is welcome to it. Please pay for the item on the GoFundMe page ( and email me. Thanks!

  3. Sorry I've been out of internet service. I'd still like this if Natasha doesn't want it.

  4. Yes, Natasha hasn't come for it so if you go ahead and donate, it's yours. :0)