Wednesday, July 22, 2015

Bartles' GoFundMe Auction Item #3 - Query Critique by The Query Helper (That's me!)

About this item: A two-pass query critique of a children's book query. Can be PB, MG, or YA manuscript query.

Donated by...
The Query Helper
(AKA E.G. Moore, or Me)
Twitter @egmoorewriter

E.G. MOORE is a freelance writer, storyteller, and children's book author. She's represented by Jessica Schmeidler of Golden Wheat Literary Agency, and her middle grade novel ROWDY DAYS OF DOM SANDERS is currently looking for its publisher. She participates as a long distance member of For Pete’s Sake Writers Group in Washington, is active in an email writer’s response group, and is an Inland Northwest Chapter SCBWI member, as well also a blog assistant for YAtopia. When she's not telling “mommy made stories” to her two daughters, you can find her off-roading in a suped-up ATV, swimming, or in a long, plot-refreshing bubble bath. She tweets, posts on Facebook, and blogs at

Starting Bid $10

TURN AROUND TIME: Please allow two weeks for query critiques + 1st chapters, four weeks for partials, and six weeks for full critiques. Donors will discuss turnaround times with winners. All winning bids are guaranteed. Should some unforeseen event happen, money will be returned to winner or the winner may choose to have Emily Moore provide the critique. 


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  3. The winner is: Tara Luebbe with a bid of $20.00. Please pay for your auction item by entering it on the GoFundMe campaign here: After you make your donation, send your email address to When we’ve verified your donation, we will send you information on how to claim your item. You have 24 hours to place your donation or the item will be given to the next highest bidder. Thank you!

  4. Tara hasn't claimed this, so Erin is welcome to it! Please pay for the auction item and email me. Thanks!

  5. I'm sorry,I was not at a computer all day. If I still can, I can pay for it. Please let me know if still unclaimes.

    1. Tara it's still unclaimed, if you want it. :)

    2. Oh! My mistake! Tara, Erin did pay for this one. But I will do a query critique for you if you want, since I already said it wasn't claimed.

    3. Veronica, I sent you a private email via your website.