Wednesday, July 22, 2015

Bartles' GoFundMe Auction Item #5: Query + 10 Page Critique by Kyra Nelson

About this item: A single pass critique through a query and first ten-pages of a single manuscript.

Donated by …

 Kyra Nelson
Twitter: @KyraMNelson
Kyra Nelson is an intern at A+B Works Literary Agency. She received her BA in English language and editing from Brigham Young University where she is currently pursuing an MA in linguistics with research related to young adult fiction. Kyra is also a freelance editor. She is open to editing all genres except erotica.

Starting Bid $10

TURN AROUND TIME: Please allow two weeks for query critiques + 1st chapters, four weeks for partials, and six weeks for full critiques. Donors will discuss turnaround times with winners. All winning bids are guaranteed. Should some unforeseen event happen, money will be returned to winner or the winner may choose to have Emily Moore provide the critique.


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  3. The winner is: Sara with a bid of $50.00. Please pay for your auction item by entering it on the GoFundMe campaign here: After you make your donation, send your email address to When we’ve verified your donation, we will send you information on how to claim your item. You have 24 hours to place your donation or the item will be given to the next highest bidder. Thank you!