Wednesday, July 22, 2015

Bartles' GoFundMe Auction Item #8: Live Edits via Skype on First 3 Chapters by Tiffany Marie Hofmann

About this item: Live Skype Edits: A two-pass critique of query and first three chapters.

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Tiffany Marie Hofmann

Tiffany Hofmann is an author (among other things) from Baltimore, Maryland. She began writing at a young age (mostly bad poetry and short stories) and was told she had "a way with words". In 2012 she completed her first full length manuscript (75,000 words) which is a Young Adult Romantic Urban Fantasy (which is sitting on a shelf waiting to be redone). She writes Young Adult, New Adult and Adult in the genres of Romance (and several sub genres), High (Epic) Fantasy, Urban Fantasy, Thriller, Paranormal and Apocalyptic. Tiffany is true to her zodiac sign through and through: Aries all the way! She's been a paranormal investigator and demonologist since 2001. She considers herself a hopeless romantic with a dirty mind, which explains the stories she writes. She is also a proud single mother of three beautiful children. She loves animals, music and is fiercely loyal to her friends. Tiffany is of Irish, German, Polish, and Cherokee Indian decent (AND PROUD), but she loves Hawaiian culture.

Starting Bid $10  

TURN AROUND TIME: Please allow two weeks for query critiques + 1st chapters, four weeks for partials, and six weeks for full critiques. Donors will discuss turnaround times with winners. All winning bids are guaranteed. Should some unforeseen event happen, money will be returned to winner or the winner may choose to have Emily Moore provide the critique. 


  1. The winner is: Andrea Luhman with a bid of $50.00. Please pay for your auction item by entering it on the GoFundMe campaign here: After you make your donation, send your email address to When we’ve verified your donation, we will send you information on how to claim your item. You have 24 hours to place your donation or the item will be given to the next highest bidder. Thank you!