This idea stewed and stewed for a few days. Granted, I was and still am on a mini-vacation tucked away in the Idaho hills hanging out with the in-laws as my husband plays hunter during venison and elk season, so much so that getting online to submit queries is a feat in itself. But whenever I spend time with my other family, as I call them, they make me laugh because I hear all kinds of stories about my husband and his brother when they were kids.
These stories quite entertain. I had a bit of a topsy-turvy childhood, full of divorce and job chasing parents complete with constant relocation, and my sisters and I weren't nearly as close as my husband and brother-in-law.
Then two nights ago, I saw a trend in fairy tales being modernized and resold. Brilliance struck. Why not take the stories I laugh over and translate them into a modern take on Tom Sawyer? I am not claiming to be a modern Mark Twain, but with some ingenuity, and my families permission, I think it could be a best seller. As soon as they said yes, I got to work. A general outline, character list and 2,400 words written already, and I think I am on to something.
Here's a little blurb bit for my faithful readers!
The
spring evenings were growing longer. It was not dark, yet, and neither of our
parents had made it home from work. I came out the front door, bucket in hand,
and turned to the weed trail we had pressed all the way to the shed and the box
Dad had built as a compose bin. But I
stopped short. A stranger was there—a boy stockier than me. A new-comer of any
age, boy or girl, was rare in the small town of Millville. This boy was well
dressed, too—new Levis and a button up shirt. His hair was red as a robin’s breast, and his
teeth were crocked but white. This was simply astounding. He had fancy Nikes on. He had a snobby attitude about him that rubbed
me wrong. The more I stared at the boy, the less I thought of his clothes and
the shabbier and shabbier my own outfit seemed to feel. I took another step toward him, and he did
likewise, each of our eyebrows raised at each other, until we were only a few
feet apart. Neither of us spoke.
Finally
the stranger said, “I could kick your butt.”
“I’d
like to see you try!” I retorted.
"Well,
I can do it."
"No
you can't."
"Yes
I can."
"No
you can't."
"I
can."
"Can't."
An
awkward pause lapsed. Then I said, “Who are you?”
“None
of your beeswax!”
“Well,
I aim to find out.”
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