Showing posts with label agenting. Show all posts
Showing posts with label agenting. Show all posts

Wednesday, September 27, 2017

Two Firsts (Part 1) - First Live Pitch to an Editor

I just got back from an invigorating experience at the Idaho Writers League (IWL) 2017 annual conference. This year it was held in Pocatello, which really isn't a big, exciting city. In true Emily fashion, I made the most of it.



Our Travelodge was lackluster, but I only needed to shower and sleep in my room. The true gems of this place were the comfy chairs in the lobby and the bar with live music on Friday and Saturday nights. The first night was all Smirnoff and southern rock, and it was pretty much our small group of older white folk playing pool and dancing until eleven o'clock.

The second night, we were outnumbered in a sea of culture. A better known group speaking rapid Spanish and serenading couples with a saxophone put some mariachi rock out there. The dance floor was packed. I nursed wine that night, and was dubbed the pool shark. The name was hilarious since the seven games in a row that I won were accomplished through no fault of my own. My opponents kept following the eight ball with the cue ball into a pocket.

You didn't come to this post to read about the fun, but its important to remember the details when you journal, or so the Gary Eckhart said in his talk on journaling. I think its time I start treating this blog like one and see what happens.




Speakers at the conference!

I spent almost as much time learning about Idaho Magazine, writing fantasy, and book marketing as I did running around and accomplishing some of my IWL duties as state treasurer and Coeur d'Alene Chapter president. Checks needed written, votes needed cast for big changes, and I needed to meet a lot of people. It's amazing how writing can forge friendships.

Why would I drive eight hours just to go to a conference? Well, I am a leader, and I really really really enjoyed the carpooling with friends and the free writing time. (Seriously, I haven't written that much in one day in over a year, and I got to do it twice in four days!). The biggest reason in my mind was pitching to a publisher.

My three carpooling buddies Kathleen, Bill, and Jeremy!

Some of you know that I've had an agent for nearly two years now, and in that time I've written five novels, half a dozen picture books, and countless queries (my own and some of yours, too!). Small submission batches for the BIG publishers had already gone out via my agent, with some returning quickly and some not yet responding. When I saw the conference speaker bios and that I could pay for a 15-minute session, I had to check out the publisher.

I couldn't believe it. TWO of my books would fit right into their list. MOON DAUGHTER RISING was a middle grade fantasy with dark and family-based themes. They had also recently published some middle grade contemporary novels and had another one releasing, so ROWDY DAYS OF DOM SANDERS was another contender. This was my chance.

Twitter stalking was impossible, as the editor that was taking the pitches keeps a low profile on social media. I did check out their authors, excitement flaring at the pictures of book signings and readings plastered on their social media. That could be me!

My slot was scheduled about 11:00am when sweet Alice Dun of Pocatello chapter came with a slip of paper with 15 minute intervals in a list.

"How about 10 minutes from now?" she asked.

I quivered. I wasn't ready yet. I needed to go to my hotel room and talk myself straight. I asked her if I could have 45 minutes and she switched with me. I hugged her and rushed to my room.

Then I went back over my pitch and bio, as well as the blurb my agent told me to include with her take on the manuscript. I'd spent the last four weeks polishing it in case the editor wanted it next day. Those stories had been repeated to me by just about everyone I'd encountered and all our chapter members the week before at one of our meetings. I gathered my business card, my agent's business card, and the printed first chapter of the manuscript into a folder and pinned it all together with a paperclip. Deep breaths, ready. Not ready. No, no, I was ready.

I walked down the hotel hall with confidence, rocking my power outfit and heels. Preparation was my middle name. I had this.

I reached the coffee pot where it was far enough away to not intrude on the pitch in session, but close enough that they knew I was there and waiting. I was excited for my friend currently sitting with the editor, but he went way past his 15 minutes. I said a prayer and tried to hold still. A few friends walked through the lobby and into the presentations going on, each stopping to chat for a minute. They each calmed my nerves (thanks Lila, Jeremy, Larry, and Richard!).



Playing with the Conference props. Theme: Rendezvous




My turn! The editor (who must not be named) invited me to sit, and I perched myself on the edge of the plush, red wing-backed chair.


Make eye contact, speak slow. I reminded myself.

I was vulnerable. I told her that it was my first pitch session but that I was excited to meet her. I asked if she'd like to hear more about me or my pitch first. She asked for the pitch. So I took a breath and managed to get the pitch out, including word count, comparison titles, and my agent's words of praise. Then I told her how I decided to pitch to her because I felt my books would fit right onto her list.

She asked questions. I responded. We joked like old friends. She complimented me, asked about my contemporary novel ROWDY DAYS OF DOM SANDERS, and seemed interested. I gave her the folder. Then she complimented me on my pitch, preparation, and said I did great.

THEN SHE SAID SHE WANTED A FULL MANUSCRIPT  WITHIN TWO WEEKS AND SAID SHE'D BE CALLING MY AGENT!!!!!



via GIPHY

Guys, GUYS, this is what dreams are made of. I shook her hand and practically skipped back through the lobby. The rest of the weekend, my friends laughed at my dream face, like....


via GIPHY


Jeremy even insisted on calling the chair I sat in during the pitch my throne, and made me blush more then once talking about what happened.




This could be it! I had to chronicle the experience.

So I've been doing another sweep through the manuscript and just sent it to my agent and a few critique partners for final read-throughs. Part two comes from one of these read-throughs, so if you haven't followed my blog yet, please do! You won't want to miss it! 

Hint: I've always dreamed of seeing a child read my book....



Sunday, March 27, 2016

Announcing #FicFest TEAM INDIA!

Welcome to the #FicFest
Meet the Teams
Blog Announcement!


I'd super excited to announce (Picture Book) 







































When my team mates and I had the opportunity to choose a destination for the World Tour, we wanted a place rich with culture, joy, and color. India seemed like a perfect fit! Here are some fun facts about India... consider it your tour itinerary.




  • India is about 1/3 the size of the United States, yet it is the second most populous country in the world, with a population of 1,166,079,217. India is the seventh largest country in the world, at 1.27 million square miles.

  • The Kumbh Mela (or Grand Pitcher Festival) is a huge Hindu religious festival that takes place in India every 12 years. In 2001, 60 million people attended, breaking the record for the world’s biggest gathering. The mass of people was photographed from space by a satellite. See picture below for 2010's pilgrimage.






  • India is the largest democracy in the world.

  • The Indian flag has three horizontal bands of color: saffron for courage and sacrifice, white for truth and peace, and green for faith, fertility, and chivalry. An emblem of a wheel spinning used to be in the center of the white band, but when India gained independence, a Buddhist dharma chakra, or wheel of life, replaced the spinning wheel.






  • Cows can be found freely wandering the streets of India’s cities. They are considered sacred and will often wear a tilak, a Hindu symbol of good fortune. Cows are considered one of humankind’s seven mothers because they offer milk as does one’s natural mother.

  • Dancing is one of India’s most highly developed arts and was an integral part of worship in the inner shrines of every temple. It is notable for its expressive hand movements.

  • India is the birthplace of chess. The original word for “chess” is the Sanskritchaturanga, meaning “four members of an army”—which were mostly likely elephants, horses, chariots, and foot soldiers.







  • The earliest cotton in the world was spun and woven in India. Roman emperors would wear delicate cotton from India that they would call “woven winds.” Mogul emperors called the fabrics “morning dew” and “cloth of running water.”

  • The Himalayas—from the Sanskrit hima, meaning “snow,” and alaya, meaning “abode”—are found in the north of India. They extend 1,500 miles and are slowly growing taller, by almost an inch (2.5 cm) a year. Several ancient Indian monasteries are found nestled in the grandeur of these mountains.

  • The Bengal tiger is India’s national animal. It was once ubiquitous throughout the country, but now there are fewer than 4,000 wild tigers left.





  • The banyan, or Indian fig tree, is considered a symbol of immortality and is mentioned in many Indian myths and legends. This self-renewing plant is India’s national tree.

  • Marigold flowers are used as decoration for Hindu marriages and are a symbol of good fortune and happiness.





Emily Moore

Team India Leader



E. G. Moore is an author, freelance writer, and storyteller (the first of which her mom still has recorded on a cassette tape.)  She is a long distance member of For Pete’s Sake Writers Group in Washington, active in an email writer’s response group, and Vice President of the Idaho Writers League Coeur d’Alene Chapter. She’s also a blog assistant for YAtopia

She's awaiting news from one of the big six publishers on acceptence of her Middle Grade Tom Sawyer retelling ROWDY DAYS OF DOM SANDERS. Her essay WEARING TERESA’S BOOTS is scheduled to be featured in Hope Paige’s Anthology on loss in 2016. When she’s not telling “Mommy Made stories” to her two daughters or nagging her husband to edit her latest children’s manuscript, Emily can be found off-roading in her suped-up ATV, baking something scrumptious, or in a long, plot-refreshing bubble bath. She’s represented by Jessica Schmeidler of Golden Wheat Literary. E.G. Moore tweets, posts on Facebook, and blogs at: www.emilygmoorewriter.blogspot.com.












Shari Schwarz

Team  India Member




Shari Schwarz lives in Colorado near the Rocky Mountains with her husband and their four boys. TREASURE AT LURE LAKE (April 12, 2016) is her debut novel which highlights her love for a good survival adventure story. When she’s not writing, Shari can be found freelance editing, weight-lifting, gardening or watching her boys play football, basketball, speed stacking, or wrestling. She frequently dreams of exploring Oregon Coast beaches or plotting out her next children’s book.

(Note from Emily: You MUST buy Shari's debut book. I critiqued/edited it for her a couple times and it is AMAZING!)






Jae C. Lowell

Team  India Member



Born and raised in Santa Cruz California, Jae was thrown into the world in a broken home. At the age of 12 Jae, his Mom and Brother moved across the country to Michigan to better their lives. There, Jae found himself and his not wife. At the age of 21, Jae and his wife moved back to California and have been moving back and forth ever since. Jae is a passionate writer, traveler, photographer and all around artist. Jae and his wife are currently living in California raising their 2 children and blogging/vlogging about their experiences.










Team  India Wishlist
and Favorite Picture Book List




We’re looking for something that both kids love to hear and parents love to read over and over and over again. Layered stories are great too. Anything that makes us laugh or cry will get some attention. Dry humor that has an element to it that a 4-year-old could understand will be on our list. Surprise us with your endings. Give us something that makes us see a situation from a whole new perspective, especially a little person’s. Rhythm is as important as rhyme, and rhyming needs to be done right. We also love assonance and alliteration mixed with rhythm for a fun read that twists the tongue up and makes a child giggle.


Our Favorites list includes:
  • Ben Rides On and others with kindness as an element
  • The Talking Eggs or books based on legends from different cultures
  • Ladybug Girl Series
  • Non-Fiction like A Penguin Named Patience and Finding Winnie
  • Never Tickle a Tiger
  • Say Please Louise
  • The Napping House or anything progressive like this!
  • Jim, Jimmy, James
  • Don’t Push the Button 
  • Anything Dr. Seuss
  • Anything by Nancy Tillman (the funny and the tear jerkers both)
  • The Day the Crayons Came Home
  • It's a Tiger
  • Mango, Abuela, & Me
  • Sam and Dave Dig a Hole
  • Anything by Salina Yoon
  • Brimsby's Hats
  • Lost For Words
  • The Most Magnificent Thing
  • One Busy Day
  • The Midnight Library
  • The Gift of Nothing
  • Peepsqueak
  • Sheep in a Jeep and other sheep books by Nancy E. Shaw

Monday, December 1, 2014

How I won NANOWRIMO 2014 and A medium Announcement


Just Call Me Dragon Slayer

Or in this year's case, evil-pious-human-sacrificing-lying-clan-leader-slayer. For the second year in a row, I've managed the daunting task of writing over 50k words in 30 days. I slid into the winner's circle like a baseball player sometimes does a base bag, bleeding and limping a little.

Even though I beat the plot monster for the second time this year, it feels different for a number of reasons. Some were positive and some negative, but ultimately I accomplished the goal.

The Weird Stuff

Rather than writing an entire novel, I wrote the second half of one and the first half of another in a series. This was not my original plan but it did help me move the plot along. It also has me conflicted. Should I pause the completion of the second novel to edit and rewrite the finished first one? So many interviews and articles I read say that series are great but in order to sell it, you have to sell the first book first. How much effort should I put into this second book?

Aside from the dilemma mentioned above, I also have reservations about how well I really know my characters and if I've kept them consistent enough for the second novel. It almost hurt to writ the 20k words of the second novel because I had no idea how the third POV character would respond to the situations I dropped him in.

I've always, always, always been a pantser and a linear writer. This time, I couldn't begin to tell you how much brainstorming and mental scene rewriting I did before committing it to my word doc. I also skipped several scenes  due to my uncertainty in one of my POV characters. I gotta admit, I still didn't like it. Guess this solidifies my drafting style for me. I can't rush all that glorious imperfection.

 

The Great Mess

One thing I truly enjoyed, and told several local writerly friends, is that the creative process was fantastic. I'd spent so much time rewriting and editing and submitting all summer, I'd lost my spark for the reason I write at all. I LOVE IT! Nanowrimo gave me that back.

It also reminded me of what I was capable of and pushed the envelope for me. Last year, my full focus was on Nanowrimo (with the exception of Thanksgiving). This year, I also has some serious personal stress going on and was freelancing part-time. I kept reminding myself that I was actually writing MORE then 50k because I was selling 3-6 articles per week in addition.

It is within the good stuff that I must apologize to my personal blog readers. November was a complete negligent month where this blog was concerned. But now, I'm back!

A major high-five to all the National Novel Writing Month Winners! You've shown you have what it takes and I'm proud to be among you!

A Medium Announcement Among Some BIG Ones

When I started to write this blog and reflected on all the awesome sauce that has happened in my writerly circles this month, I realized that my announcement might actually only be a medium announcement. Before we get to that, some major kudos are in order.

Kendra Young and Nikki Roberti
CONGRATULATIONS
These two very good friends of mine have given word that they are both, in fact, agented!!!! I couldn't be more happy for them and I wanted to tell everyone!
(Plus, this totally gives me hope for one day being in their shoes.) 

Now, My Medium Announcement:

The Query Helper is striking next week! If you've participated in NANO this year (and even if you haven't) take a stab at a query letter for your shiny new chunk of writing. Then keep your eye out on my blog, twitter, and facebook pages for the notice to submit. I'm going to help out five people.