Monday, October 13, 2014

Welcome guest blogger Michelle Beahm and her main character!

Hello, lovely readers of Emily’s blog, I’m Michelle. Emily was nice enough to tag me for the All About My Main Character Blog Hop, only, silly me, I don’t have a blog yet. (I should think about changing that.) For the sake of this exercise, Emily has been nice enough to lend her blog to me.)
 
This exercise is a way to get to know the main character in my most recent novel. Since my current work in progress is in the very early stages, so the main character and I are still getting to know each other, but I’m happy to share him with anyone else interested.
 
1) What is the name of your character? Is he/she fictional or a historic person? 
Zakar (Zak) Turani, an entirely fictional character. He’s mostly human, but he may or may not have a bit of mage or dragon in his family tree somewhere.
 
2) When is the story set?
A fantasy novel, the story is set in its own world and its own calendar, but I’ve based it mainly off of the Achaemenid Empire, also known as the First Persian Empire, around 550-330 B.C. With a few significant differences, of course.
 
3) What should we know about him/her? 
Zak, by virtue of befriending one of the few mages in one of the city’s Hordes (gangs, basically, although super organized), joined a Horde at a young age, and went through training for quite a few different areas before settling as a thief. Now he runs that part of the organization, and is very loyal to his people, who are, in turn, very loyal to him. His mage friend, Arach, is an honorary member as well. This, of course, causes some conflict with the leader of the Horde Ludek, who hasn’t liked Zak since Zak abandoned his training as an assassin. His life, for a few years now, has been in constant conflict with Ludek, and only because his leaving would cost the Horde a mage has kept him alive and a member of the only family he’s ever had. And he knows it, and walks that fine line carefully.
 
4) What is the main conflict? What messes up his/her life? 
In Zak’s world, the main conflict is dragons, who are, in this world, humanoid creatures as deadly and dangerous as the dragons of our mythology. They’re systematically taking over the conflict, and are getting closer and closer to Zak’s home. When the rich and the refugees from other countries start abandoning the prosperous city, he knows it’s only a matter of time before the dragons arrive. Unfortunately, his horde leader and many of the powerful members of the horde are secretly working with the dragons. Zak’s sense of honor means he can’t abandon the city and the people he cares about while so many people close to him are working to destroy his home.
The question is, what can he do about it?
 
5) What is the personal goal of the character?
Growing up as an orphan, in a culture that has a strong emphasis on family, has left Zak with a deep-seeded need to belong. To a place, to people, anything. He wants a home and a family. With his band of thieves, he has that, to a certain extent, but the dragons definitely threaten it. His personal goal is to not lose the only family he’s ever had.
 
6) Is there a working title for this novel, and can we read more about it?  
This novel is in the very early stages of it. A vast majority of the first draft hasn’t even been written yet, so I haven’t even started thinking about titles. I am, however, querying another novel, Matters of the Soul, about a powerful djinni living in modern-day Seattle, which is in the querying stages. More about it can be found on my twitter account, @michelle_beahm.
 
7) When can we expect the book to be published?
In a few years, I’m hoping. I want to get the first draft done by the end of February, at the latest, and then I plan on dedicating much time to revisions and edits, so that hopefully by this time next year, I will be ready to submit it to the agent I hope to have by then, or to query elsewhere if s/he isn’t interested.
 
Now, to pass this along, I tag JennyFerguson for this fun exercise.

All about my main character, because Nikki wanted to know!

Once again, my writerly friends have swept me up into another blog hop! I’ve been tagged by the fabulous Nikki Roberti for the “Writerly Meme” which is all about my main character from my latest novel. (Check out her Meme post here.) Though DOM is being thrown in editors' and agents' inboxes and entered in contests galore lately, I'm actually going to talk about one of my W.I.P novel's main characters (it's a multiple point-of-view manuscript).

1) What is the name of your character? Is he/she fictional or a historic person? 
 Samana (pronounced Sa-mana) is a Flairian Wanderer, a homeless member of a superior race to man with talent/magic tattoos.
 
2) When is the story set?
Dyshiwi is a fictional land based loosely on the US Southwestern deserts and cliff dwellings.

3) What should we know about him/her? 
 She's rough around the edges, very untrusting of others, and confused about her place in society. Unlike other young flairians, she's had her mark since infancy and no power or talents to go along with it.

4) What is the main conflict? What messes up his/her life? 
 The leader of the land is collecting Wanderers to work alongside humans in mines and pits. When the only person Samana trusts is snatched up and then they come for her, she does the only thing she knows how: she runs.

5) What is the personal goal of the character?
Samana just wants to belong somewhere, and becoming an apprentice might get her there. That is, until a rebellion brews in Dyshiwi, and the Flairian she might care for is a part of it.
 
6) Is there a working title for this novel, and can we read more about it?  
It's part of a two book series called The Flairian Tradition, and it's working title is SAMANA'S FLAIR. The second book, entitled A SOUL AND A SONG, will be my 2014 NANO project if I can complete the first one this month. I've posted bits and pieces on this blog over the last six months, but hardly any beta readers or even CPs have seen much of it yet. I've only written 11 chapters!

7) When can we expect the book to be published?
I'm hoping by 2016. I want to have rough drafts done by this December 1st, final edits done by May 1st 2015, and start querying next summer.

And now I shall pass on the fun to Heather Truett and Michelle Beahm!

Query Helper Giveaway: A pair, a pair, a pair of critiques!

Well, the five pitchslam contest teams have been chosen, and sadly, DOM and I didn't make the cut. I'll be cheering for a few of the people I know who made it to the agent round. But I'd also like to give back in some small way, as well as prepare a few more people for the next twitter-based writing contest: Nightmare on Query Street.

I'll also be entering this query, rather than pitch, based contest. But I'd love to help two people get their query in top shape. The first two people to answer this question in the comments below will get them:

What parts of your novel do you love most? (plot, a certain character, stakes, a particular scene that makes you laugh, etc...)

 Be sure to leave your email with the comment.

Have a great Monday everyone!

Friday, September 26, 2014

Query Helper Giveaway Now!

Hello all and welcome back! It's that time again...

Query Helper Time!

The first five people to comment with an answer to the question below will get a query critique this weekend. I'll do my best to get the first round back by Sunday. Be sure to check out The Query Helper page for participate testimonials on my help! (If nothing else, you'll get excited!)

So tell me...

Do you have a genre or age group you'd like to write in, but don't feel like you could? Why or why not?

Be sure to leave your email address in your comment!

Sunday, September 14, 2014

Inspiring Yourself

You often hear of writer's coming onto ideas from outside sources: a girl playing in the park, big or small events in history, their childhood (shoot, I did that with the novel I'm currently querying). But I recently inspired myself in two ways, first by digging into memories and second intentionally seeking out experiences to cultivate story ideas.

About a week ago, my husband and I moved the items in our small storage unit to a larger one so we'd have a place to store our outdoor recreational vehicles in the Wyoming winter weather. I decided to crack open a box, and discovered some albums and notebooks filled with pictures from my early family vacations and snippets of writing I'd jotted down. A bit of a story began to take shape in my head.


 Almost a month ago, my mom asked if she could ride back home with me to help with the driving and my daughters. And on the way she wanted to stop and see her Father. I insisted if we were going that far south, we might as well stop and see some historical sites. Seeing the Aztec dwellings near my grandfather's formed a foundation for the story I'd barely started.




Ways such as these can help a writer spark their own creativity. Drawing from items or experiences of your own pave the way for a plot rich in personal details, emotions, and rev up all the senses. Have you ever fired up your own writerly genius? Has it lead to a novel plot or other creative processes?

Friday, September 12, 2014

The Query Helper - Giving Away 3 Critiques today!

It's Friday! You know what that means!

THE QUERY HELPER GIVEAWAY!

The first three people to comment below with their email and their answer to the following question will get a query critique:

That is your punctuation nemesis?

Mine is the comma, this week.... Looking forward to the answers and working with whoever comments!

Thursday, September 11, 2014

10 Books That Have Affected Me

A one, fabulous Ms. Hayley Stone tagged me well over a week ago to write about ten books that affected me in some way. (Click her name above to go to her fabulous blog!) To be honest, I had no idea how to narrow it down to just ten. So bear with me and keep in mind that I have dozens more that I love.

1. Into the Land of the Unicorns 
This is one of my all-time favorite novels. I read it over and over and over until it fell apart. Then I taped it back together and kept reading it. Yes sir, I still have the same copy awaiting my daughters. Something in Cara's determination and curiosity, plus the mystery surrounding the Hunter made her feel like a friend to me. At my tender age, it gave me hope that I could do anything, just like Cara.




2. My Sister's Keeper
I read this much later in life (because, you know, I'm so old at twenty-eight). The emotional depth and sly narrating that made the twist at the end happen totally suckered me in. I loved this about all Jodi Picoult's books.







3. The Constant Princess
This was the first of Phillippa Gregory's novels I read, and I soon devoured every single one. She fed my love for historical novels with her vivid imagery and distinct development of every character.








4. The Talking Eggs
My earliest library memory was of the Hayfork Elementary Librarian reading this picture book to my class as we lounged on the ragged green and orange carpet. The details and the moral of the story stuck with me for life.





5. Tumford the Terrible
This hilarious picture book with a sound lesson is my youngest daughter's absolute favorite, so much so that I have it memorized. And I love it too. My mother-in-law sent this in a string of Nancy Tillman books. That tradition started with....







6. On The Night You Were Born
...this one! It has beautiful illustrations, sound truths about the value of each person, that happy gut feeling, and tears every read. Mix that with the struggle I had birthing my oldest daughter, who received this as a baby and you know its on my favorites list.





7. Anne of Green Gables, etc...
  
I loved these sort of early classics, but Anne takes the cake! Plus, the love/hate relationship Anne and Gilbert have sort of resembles me and my husband's friendship growing up together. Hilarious with a happy ending. 







8. Daughter of the Forest
If you love fantasy, especially with a fable base, and you haven't read this book and it's additional series titles, go get it right now! In my opinion, Juliet Marillier is a master story teller. Her vivid imagery and superb characters make this a page turner.







9. Trusting God: Even When Life Hurts
This book helped me through some hard emotional times, including the bout of depression that eventually lead me back to writing and kick-started my freelancing and fiction career. Some deep questions about not only about God but being honest with ourselves and trusting in His plans.







10. Persuasion
If I had to chose an all-time favorite classic, Persuasion would win every time. Jane Austen is subtly witty, and her books' messages still translate into situations in our modern world. I like all her books really. Persuasion just happens to be my favorite. Forget Mr. Darcy. Captain Fredrick Wentworth is "much handsomer, how infinitely more agreeable..."





And there you have it, the ten books that bolstered my reading habit and kept my love of literature alive until I decided to write my own.

Commenters, what was your earliest library memory? What book was a part of it?



It's my turn to tag a few people. I chose Shari Shwarz, Brian Montanaro, and Jessie Mullins. I can't wait to read your book picks. If you need a place to post, feel free to put your picks on a guest post here at E.G. Moore Freelance and Fiction!