Monday, July 27, 2015

Bartles Go Fund Me Auction Item #33: OVER IN THE WETLANDS by Caroline Starr Rose



About this item: Copy of OVER IN THE WETLANDS picture book

Donated by …


 Caroline Starr Rose

Caroline Starr Rose was named a Publishers Weekly Flying Start Author for her debut novel, May B., which was an ALA-ALSC Notable Children’s Book. Caroline spent her childhood in the deserts of Saudi Arabia and New Mexico, camping by the Red Sea in one and eating red chile in the other. She has taught social studies and English, and worked to instill in her students a passion for books, an enthusiasm for experimenting with words, and a curiosity about the past. She lives in New Mexico. 

Over in the Wetlands: A Hurricane-on-the-Bayou Story
 

Publishing in time for the tenth anniversary of Hurricane Katrina, here is a beautiful read-aloud about animal families preparing for an impending storm in their bayou habitat.

Journey to the Louisiana wetlands and watch as all the animals of the bayou experience one of nature’s most dramatic and awe-inspiring events: a hurricane. The animals prepare—swimming for safer seas, finding cover in dens, and nestling their young close to protect them. During the height of the storm, even the trees react, cracking and moaning in the wind. At last, the hurricane yawns and rests, and animals come out to explore their world anew.

Over in the Wetlands Discussion Guide and Activity Sheets



Starting Bid $10


TURN AROUND TIME: Please allow two weeks for query critiques + 1st chapters, four weeks for partials, and six weeks for full critiques. Donors will discuss turnaround times with winners. All winning bids are guaranteed. Should some unforeseen event happen, money will be returned to winner or the winner may choose to have Emily Moore provide the critique.

Bartles Go Fund Me Auction Item #32: ARC of Blue Birds + Educator's Guide PDF Link by Caroline Starr Rose



About this item: ARC of novel BLUE BIRDS

Donated by …


 Caroline Starr Rose

Caroline Starr Rose was named a Publishers Weekly Flying Start Author for her debut novel, May B., which was an ALA-ALSC Notable Children’s Book. Caroline spent her childhood in the deserts of Saudi Arabia and New Mexico, camping by the Red Sea in one and eating red chile in the other. She has taught social studies and English, and worked to instill in her students a passion for books, an enthusiasm for experimenting with words, and a curiosity about the past. She lives in New Mexico. 

BLUE BIRDS



It’s 1587 and twelve-year-old Alis has made the long journey with her parents from England to help settle the New World, the land christened Virginia in honor of the Queen. And Alis couldn’t be happier. While the streets of London were crowded and dirty, this new land, with its trees and birds and sky, calls to Alis. Here she feels free. But the land, the island Roanoke, is also inhabited by the Roanoke tribe and tensions between them and the English are running high, soon turning deadly.
Amid the strife, Alis meets and befriends Kimi, a Roanoke girl about her age. Though the two don’t even speak the same language, these girls form a special bond as close as sisters, willing to risk everything for the other. Finally, Alis must make an impossible choice when her family resolves to leave the island and bloodshed behind.
A beautiful, tender story of friendship and the meaning of family, Caroline Starr Rose delivers another historical gem.

Blue Birds Educator’s Guide
Lost Colony timeline


Starting Bid $10


TURN AROUND TIME: Please allow two weeks for query critiques + 1st chapters, four weeks for partials, and six weeks for full critiques. Donors will discuss turnaround times with winners. All winning bids are guaranteed. Should some unforeseen event happen, money will be returned to winner or the winner may choose to have Emily Moore provide the critique.

Friday, July 24, 2015

Bartles Go Fund Me Auction Item #30: A Query Letter Critique by Agent Julia A. Webber



About this item: I will help polish the one-page query letter before the author sends it off to agents/ editors. This includes line edits, general feedback, and questions and comments on potentially unclear points. Once the author's had time to make adjustments, I will go over the query letter a second time. Following another round of adjustments, I will go over it a third (and last) time to make sure it's the strongest version it can be.

Donated by …
 Julia A. Webber
Literary Agent 

A literary agent by day and freelance fiction editor by night, Julia is specializing in unique and captivating commercial children’s and adult fiction, namely Middle Grade, Young Adult, New Adult, Women’s Fiction, thrillers, and romance. Julia’s not too keen on sci-fi and futuristic stories, and Fantasy should be set in the real world. Other than that, she’s open to all sub-genres. A hooking plot, engaging characters, and a fresh voice are a must.


Starting Bid $10


TURN AROUND TIME: Please allow two weeks for query critiques + 1st chapters, four weeks for partials, and six weeks for full critiques. Donors will discuss turnaround times with winners. All winning bids are guaranteed. Should some unforeseen event happen, money will be returned to winner or the winner may choose to have Emily Moore provide the critique.

Bartles Go Fund Me Auction Item #31: A Query Letter Critique by Agent Julia A. Webber



About this item: I will help polish the one-page query letter before the author sends it off to agents/ editors. This includes line edits, general feedback, and questions and comments on potentially unclear points. Once the author's had time to make adjustments, I will go over the query letter a second time. Following another round of adjustments, I will go over it a third (and last) time to make sure it's the strongest version it can be.

Donated by …
 
 Julia A. Webber
Literary Agent 

A literary agent by day and freelance fiction editor by night, Julia is specializing in unique and captivating commercial children’s and adult fiction, namely Middle Grade, Young Adult, New Adult, Women’s Fiction, thrillers, and romance. Julia’s not too keen on sci-fi and futuristic stories, and Fantasy should be set in the real world. Other than that, she’s open to all sub-genres. A hooking plot, engaging characters, and a fresh voice are a must.

Starting Bid $10


TURN AROUND TIME: Please allow two weeks for query critiques + 1st chapters, four weeks for partials, and six weeks for full critiques. Donors will discuss turnaround times with winners. All winning bids are guaranteed. Should some unforeseen event happen, money will be returned to winner or the winner may choose to have Emily Moore provide the critique.

Wednesday, July 22, 2015

Blog Auction to Help Save Veronica Bartles Home


Amid my summer chaos, I missed Brenda Drake's call out for donations of writer-related goods in order to set up an auction to help Pitch Wars Mentor Veronica Bartles. Pitch Wars had a huge impact on me last year and I interacted with Veronica on several occasions throughout it. She's a part of my writing community and a wonderful person too.

She's also a fellow military wife. She and her family bought a home in Maryland, but military orders sent them to New Mexico. In preparation to move back to their home this summer, Veronica took a trip to Maryland to discover the home had major water damage and mold. Their insurance refused to cover any of it.




A Go Fund Me campaign has been set up to help raise money for the Bartles, and Brenda Drake used above mentioned donations as services to auction off for high bids toward this fund. If you can, please donate to it.  Together, we can help them rebuild! Even a $5 donation can make all the difference!

Though I won several bids and donated to the fund, I wanted to do more. Turns out, I'm not the only one who feels this way! Brenda was bombarded with additional people willing to donate after the auction had already started. Like me, they wanted to give more. So I volunteered my blog as a place to hold a second auction of us late-comers. So if you bid and didn't win on Brenda's auction, here's another chance to get a little something when you give!

My auction will close on Wednesday, July 29   Friday, July 31st at Noon PST.

If you’re interested in an auction item, simply enter the bid in the comments of the post for the item. The starting bid is $10. Once you’ve placed your bid, make sure to check back or click the box at the bottom right of the post labeled "Notify me” so as each bid comes in, you'll get an email and can return to counter bid.

For critique items, make sure to read the donor’s bio to determine if they will be a good fit for your manuscript. Manuscripts do not have to be finished for partial critiques, only full critiques.

Do not post bids to this post. Make sure to post them to the individual post for the item you wish to bid on. (See the list below for the list of posts and items offered.)

Do not place bids in the comment of this post. Bids should be entered in the individual auction item post.

No bids will be accepted after the auction closes.

The winners will be asked to go to the Bartles’ Go Fund Me page (Don’t donate until you win the bid, unless you want to donate now as an added help for the Bartles) and donate the amount of the bid they placed on the item. When your name posts on the page, it will be confirmation of payment and I will post further instructions in the comments of the posts.

Here are all the awesome items up for bid …




Auction Item #4 - 3 Chapter Critique by Kate Foster

Auction Item #5 - Query + 10 Page Critique by Kyra Nelson

Auction Item #6 - Marketing Consultation by Dea Poirier 

Auction Item #7 - Full Manuscript Critique By Dakota Shain Byrd 

Auction Item #8 - Live Edits via Skype on First 3 Chapters by Tiffany Marie Hofmann

Auction Item #9 -  3 Chapter Critique by Kate Foster

Auction Item #10 - Query Critique by Dakota Shain Byrd

Auction Item #11 - Query Critique by Dakota Shain Byrd

Auction Item #12 - Query Critique by Dakota Shain Byrd

Auction Item #13 - 1st 5 Pages by Critique Dakota Shain Byrd

Auction Item #14 - 1st 5 Pages by Critique Dakota Shain Byrd

Auction Item #15 - 1st Chapter Critique by Dakota Shain Byrd

Auction Item #16 - Submission Package Critique by Dakota Shain Byrd

Auction Item #17 - Submission Package Critique by Dakota Shain Byrd

Auction Item #18 - Submission Package Critique by Dakota Shain Byrd

Auction Item #19 - Query + 1st 5 Pages Critique by Agent Jessica Sinsheimer

Auction Item #20 - Query + 1st 5 Pages Critique by Tobie Easton

Auction Item #21 -  45-minute phone consultation with Tobie Easton

Auction Item #22 - ARC Copy of BOOKISHLY EVER AFTER by Isabel Bandeira

Auction Item #23 - Query + 1st Chapter Critique by Abby Cooper

Auction Item #24 -  Phone Consultation on choice of item with Terrie Wolf of AKA Literary 

Auction Item #25 - Online Platform Graphic Design Package by Veronica Bartles

Auction Item #26 -  Swag Graphic Design Package by Veronica Bartles

Auction Item #27 - Query + 1st Chapter Critique by Brenda Drake

Auction Item #28 - Signed Copy of WHAT THE TOWN KNEW by Emily McKeon

Auction Item #29 -  Social Media Platform Analysis + First 50 Pages Critique by Carrie Ann

Auction Item #30 - A Query Letter Critique by Literary Agent Julia A. Webber

Auction Item #31 -  A Query Letter Critique by Literary Agent Julia A. Webber

Auction Item #32 - ARC Copy of novel BLUE BIRDS by Caroline Starr Rose

Auction Item #33 - Copy of picture book DOWN IN THE WETLANDS by Caroline Starr Rose


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Bartles' GoFundMe Auction Item #1: 3 Chapter Critique by Author and Editor Fiona McLaren



About this item: A single pass critique through first 3 chapters of a manuscript.


Donated by …

Fiona's dog Babe-Mou,
 Fiona McLaren
Twitter @BookOmnivore

Fiona McLaren is an accomplished ghost writer for children's fiction and historical fiction, and has also published over 300 independent pieces, ranging from articles through to short stories. In addition, she is currently working as a scriptwriter on a feature length animation and is a full time copywriter and content writer for a marketing company. Fiona takes on independent editing projects on a selective basis.
Starting Bid $10

TURN AROUND TIME: Please allow two weeks for query critiques + 1st chapters, four weeks for partials, and six weeks for full critiques. Donors will discuss turnaround times with winners. All winning bids are guaranteed. Should some unforeseen event happen, money will be returned to winner or the winner may choose to have Emily Moore provide the critique.

Bartles' GoFundMe Auction Item #2 - First 3 Chapter Critique by Author Ryan Dalton


About this item: A critique of the first 3 chapters of a manuscript.

Donated by...


Ryan Dalton


RYAN DALTON either wears a cape and fights crime abroad, or he writes about it from his red captain’s chair at home. Perhaps he’s a superhero that’s trained with the world’s finest heroes, or he’s a lifelong geek who sings well and makes a decent dish of spaghetti. It’s also plausible that he’s been plotting to take over the world since he was ten, or that he’s since been writing novels to stir the heart and spark the imagination. Either way he lives in an invisible spaceship that’s currently hovering above Phoenix, Arizona. 


Starting Bid $10




TURN AROUND TIME: Please allow two weeks for query critiques + 1st chapters, four weeks for partials, and six weeks for full critiques. Donors will discuss turnaround times with winners. All winning bids are guaranteed. Should some unforeseen event happen, money will be returned to winner or the winner may choose to have Emily Moore provide the critique.